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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-02-09 07:44 AM


Cough or not to Cough

I coughed a vision on an ear
Nothing much and not severe
But low the sound did ring a bell
And the odor of a smell

Perhaps it was naïve of me
To cough a mist upon your sea
But I did not dispense a storm
Only what I thought was norm

If some symbol flew the cage
And brought about this storm of rage
Forgive me friend I did not think
To me it was a simple wink.

Lets let the bubble blow its cast
I’m sure this cough won’t be the last
We all have phantoms on the range
Forgive me friend I’m just as strange.

So let us toil a new begin
And salve the boil erupts the skin.

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2004-02-09 07:47 AM


Tis better to have coughed a mist than never to have coughed at all...
Margherita
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2 posted 2004-02-09 08:30 AM


You ask for forgiveness so tenderly!

Your words work like syrup ... the cough will be forgotten!

Your poem is just great.

Love and hugs. Margherita

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3 posted 2004-02-09 09:01 AM


LOL@Nan!
I'm sure all is forgiven Sy!
Now how about a spot of tea?
~Monday smiles, hugs & tea, Nancy~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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4 posted 2004-02-09 09:04 AM



What wit!  Good morning, Sy!  

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-02-09 01:06 PM


nice
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6 posted 2004-02-09 01:41 PM


I loved this one, Seymour.
You're just as cute when you're playful
as when you're serious.
Hugs  
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-02-09 09:13 PM


Nan
That's true my love.

Margherita
Love and hugs back my dear.

Nancy,
Ah yes tea and sympathy.

Sunshine
Love you too.

passing,
Thank you sweet.

Ethel,
You are a dear.

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