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Scarlet Infinity (7000)
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Scarlet Infinity (7000) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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My dreams have run ones that stood melt in aching splendor to a river that never stops bending memories waited until we fell strange it was, to see him stare into my eyes, into my soul journals - long his soul taken by scarlet infinity Would you meet my words? {I wonder how} greet my exposure to air with snow in summer When I woke, the mist had settled -- October smelled old -- trees tangled weeping verses of leaves tenderly waiting for touch of life still darkness and night tide the escape where rivers join & rain falls with broken peace in some gentle ripple - footsteps remember your spirit in lost words ~~ it is late now earth holds my longing the sea-roses -- born of night & silence tumbling lost in summer’s shadows my last words left of you floating on wind ~~ In Loving Memory ~~**~~ You read before you words I write- See before you my soul, spinning on waves of thought, painting memories of time(JR) |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
what a sad, sweet write. I love the first stanza... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
it is late now earth holds my longing the sea-roses -- born of night & silence tumbling lost in summer’s shadows my last words left of you floating on wind Lauren, this is so, so beautiful..... even though sad. Hugs, sweet lady,  Ethel  On 7,000 I look forward to reading many, many more, my friend!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad and beautiful you do so well Congrats on your 7,000! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Congratulations on your 7000th post! This is so intensely melancholic, so beautifully written, the heart listens in suspension! Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
An incredible bittersweet write Lauren.. A masterpiece to mark this milestone. Congratulations on your 7000th post! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lauren, wow, written as only you can. This deserves another go round. Congratulations on 7000 !! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes A lovely write enjoyed the read very much. |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Much enjoyed, and congrats on your seven thousandth. One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Would you meet my words? {I wonder how} greet my exposure to air with snow in summer When I woke, the mist had settled -- October smelled old -- trees tangled weeping verses of leaves tenderly waiting for touch of life" As always Lauren, I enjoy your words more than I have words to accurately express. So...cool write...will have to do.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A wonderful 7000. There is a sadness about this beautiful poetry. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When I woke, the mist had settled -- October smelled old -- trees tangled weeping verses of leaves tenderly waiting for touch of life ~*~ This is what is when one goes forward... Congratulations on 7,000 posts! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When I woke, the mist had settled -- October smelled old -- trees tangled weeping verses of leaves tenderly waiting for touch of life still darkness and night tide the escape where rivers join & rain falls with broken peace in some gentle ripple - footsteps remember your spirit in lost words ~~ it is late now earth holds my longing the sea-roses -- born of night & silence tumbling lost in summer’s shadows my last words left of you floating on wind =========================== *sigh* your words transcend me... Im always the tardy moth these days... but I wanted to say Congrats ... this place wouldnt be the same for me without you here and I would lack so if I'd have never gotten to read your gorgeous poetry.  The work of language deserves our greatest care ... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a sad but most beautiful milestone, sweet friend, yay, congratulations, you're our newest Member Rara Avis, yay! (smiles) I send angel hugs your way to comfort this special memorial, yay for 7,000, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Nice Only problem for me was I still tend to read the words Hitting a keyboard and brackets made me wonder why, when you have the strength and vision do you need to confuse those who would read or is it the business model that if it is not made different then [p-eople } will think it is easy. Dave |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Muwwwaaahhhsss and Hugsssss Many thanks for the replies.....I appreciate your time....  ~~**~~ |
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