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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-02-08 09:51 PM



The ice in your fingers
how it drips down from
your eyes. Your spells
that you surrender are
all but lies.


The coffin is buried and
gone astray your time
and heart beat has
gone away.

The pearls of your
wisdom was false
as your stunning
walks of freedom

oh how you strut
with that cunning
air of perfection


Truth be known
you have no direction
just the ice in your
body and the thought
of gaining

Going on this way
will always keep
you waiting

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2004-02-09 01:01 PM


this is great! just what I needed today
Endlessecho
Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398
I live within myself
2 posted 2004-02-09 04:22 PM


Interesting.. I like the ideas here.
Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2004-02-09 04:30 PM


thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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