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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-02-08 07:34 PM



Picture by Jim Warren

* * *

We walk along the shore
Just as the sun begins to set
Since I fell in love with you
I don't need a safety net

We stand facing one another
As our fingers interlace
I look deep into your eyes
As I trace around your face

You are my object of affection
You help bring out my very best
You give my life direction
You are my north, south, east and west

The seabirds fly above us
As you kiss me tenderly
I see love in all its glory
As you move closer to me

While I have your love beside me
It's all I need to survive
My life now has more meaning
With your love, I come alive

* * *

"I love you, not for what you are,
but for what I am when I am with you"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2004-02-08 07:37 PM


A very well done piece
Enjoyed the fine writing and the picture

Gloom

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
2 posted 2004-02-08 07:41 PM


While I have your love beside me
It's all I need to survive
My life now has more meaning
With your love, I come alive


sue, I always love your poems.
It seems I relate to them all....
especially the love ones. LOL  
Hugs  
Ehtel


A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2004-02-08 10:04 PM


Sue,

Your poem comes alive, right off the page!
this picture is passionate too!

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-02-09 04:09 PM


Nice writing...I'd like to go swimming in those waters...James
Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 398
I live within myself
5 posted 2004-02-09 04:18 PM


Beautiful!
suthern
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since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
6 posted 2004-02-10 11:57 AM


While I have your love beside me
It's all I need to survive
My life now has more meaning
With your love, I come alive

Yes... just this. *S* Beautiful work! *S*

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2004-02-10 12:50 PM


stunning!
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
8 posted 2004-02-10 11:44 PM


Can't get much better than this!  
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