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Dirt And Dust
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Dirt And Dust Vacuuming the evidence the bag is soon full-- it bursts. Motionless and unappealing like a grub lurking in dank soil the corpse will soon be dust. © 2004 Grover Gall |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Grover This was interesting...so much turns to dust...perhaps we take it too lightly. I enjoy your poetry! |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Grim and gritty....I like |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
every time i read this it grabs me in a whole new way.... i like it as much now, as when i first read it. Snow "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Grover, Honest to goodness, I was desperate for a topic to write about yesterday and I thought about my vaccuum cleaner, but decided I couldn't figure a way to use it (physically) or in poetry! You did a fine job here! It flows beautifully and you've given the reader much to think about! Great job! ~sadelite~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent!! Much enjloyed this write Grover! Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Interesting silt like feeling to this, and very clever indeed. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Earthly write Grover. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed reading this, Grover. It makes the reader think lots of different thoughts.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
deep words....I enjoyed... ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat how that works, huh? this got me thinking |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Cute write. I'd prefer ashes ...but non of these processes is appealing!!! We shall be away on butterfly wings though ... Love, Margherita  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
interesting write....liked it...(and please don't 'ag' Balladeer on...he's mean to me yanno? |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Grover,Sounds like a dirty job great write thanks for your nice reply on mine  ...Rita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thought provoking for sure -- into my library! Enjoyed. |
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