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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-02-07 11:31 PM


(All-New Candy Heart Poem for 2004, yay! )



PEN PAL
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/7/04

Over mountains and across oceans,
friendship has the power to shine,
its message blows like a plastic bag in the wind,
would you like to be a friend of mine?

We can exchange messages through the mail,
learn more of about each others peoples and culture,
for no distance makes true friendships fail,
I'll share with you many things and I'll learn something from you I'm sure



Tell me about your family, pets, hobbies,
I'll tell you about my beliefs, joys and pasttimes,
as there are many special people like you I'd love to get to know personally,
whether across the Equator, Prime Meridian or Great Divide

Let me be your pen pal, I'll happily make you mine,
together we'll spead harmony across the Earth,
for the gift of friendship is divine,
its gift brings the world great mirth...




"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

© Copyright 2004 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Ivy Rose
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1 posted 2004-02-08 01:05 AM


Noah...This is a wonderful poem that sings the praises of friendship and diversity of race and peoples. Very descriptive as only you could write. ***Ivy Rose
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2 posted 2004-02-08 01:29 AM


you are so full of love and hope

thank you for sharing this

Youngatheart
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3 posted 2004-02-08 02:48 AM


Noah!!!!!!!!!! I cannot put into words how this poem made me feel. I love the illustrations. I work with children and I know that a child's picture is worth not a thousand words, but a million. What beautiful children in the photo, too. This is most definitely a very special piece of writing.
OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[This message has been edited by Youngatheart (02-08-2004 08:49 AM).]

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4 posted 2004-02-08 11:37 AM


Noah,,as always a treasure...I had many pen pals over the years in school,,,,too bad we lost touch as life went on
michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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5 posted 2004-02-08 11:43 AM


Noah,
Great write, enjoyed very much.

Margherita
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6 posted 2004-02-08 12:17 PM


Dear Noah, now pen pals communicate better than ever, don't they? And the whole world becomes more familiar. Out of these communications friendship can spread from individual to individual and expand from nation to nation. Hopefully.
Very beautiful!
Love and hugs. Margherita

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