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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-07 08:42 AM



Desire

my hunger for you
tempts me past weakness
a crave that edges
next to starving greed
to ache in flames
that burn white hot
in this passion that
has never before known
irresistible satisfying embrace
tender are your moments
where now has been lived
a lifetime in your arms
inspire now my yearning
as I truly know desire



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Youngatheart
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1 posted 2004-02-07 08:55 AM


my hunger for you
tempts me past weakness
a crave that edges
next to starving greed


I really liked this part.
Desire....you painted a perfect picture of it here....excellent!!!

[This message has been edited by Youngatheart (02-08-2004 08:54 AM).]

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2 posted 2004-02-07 01:20 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwww, I understand how powerful desire can be and how it can hurt too, sweet friend, may the desire turn into comfort by the gentle whisper of love, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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3 posted 2004-02-07 01:28 PM


it just takes the right one, doesnt' it?

great piece Helen, this gives me hope

Darren
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4 posted 2004-02-07 07:34 PM


I don't know about the rest of you, but... I need a cold shower!  
icebox
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5 posted 2004-02-07 07:47 PM


A raw clean taste of life....
Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-02-07 07:51 PM


WOW Helen.....beautifully sensual.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

Richy
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7 posted 2004-02-07 10:50 PM



I loved this!


Thank You




garysgirl
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8 posted 2004-02-07 11:14 PM


tender are your moments
where now has been lived
a lifetime in your arms
inspire now my yearning
as I truly know desire


Helen, I LOVE  this!!  

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