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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-01-25 04:15 PM




I admire the scene before me
As the day makes way for night
I search the far horizons
But you are nowhere in sight

As this day becomes a memory
With nature I am at one
I sit gazing over the mountains
While I watch the setting sun

Tall pines become a silhouette
Against the stunning amber sky
Love has claimed my heart
And has given me wings to fly

A bird calls from the wilderness
As the moon comes into view
And as I sit here in my solitude
I fill my mind with thoughts of you

* * *

"I arise from dreams of thee
in the first sweet sleep of night
when the winds are breathing low
and the stars are shining bright"


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2004-01-25 04:18 PM


Nice writing...James
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2004-01-25 04:55 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, and I'm sure your whole garden grows and is blessed by this love too that is bound to last forever, yay! (kiss on cheek) Hope you are having a wonderful summer down under, yay, here's koala friendship hugs, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2004-01-25 06:12 PM


Sue, this is so beautiful. I love the picture, too.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-01-25 07:03 PM


As the moon comes into view
And as I sit here in my solitude
I fill my mind with thoughts of you

I do that all the time..well not with thoughts of you..but with thoughts of someone  

hugs
M

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2004-01-25 07:18 PM


Suetang - a most breath taking photo, and writing to go with it...

BC

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

6 posted 2004-01-25 11:17 PM




Sue, I really enjoyed this!
I can so relate with it.

How nice it was to read
you again!

It’s always a real joy!
I hope all is well.

Take Great Care,
Richy


suthern
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7 posted 2004-01-26 02:47 PM


When you face a scene as beautiful as this... and the best is still the view from your heart... how lovely! *S*
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
8 posted 2004-01-26 03:51 PM


James
It's always so nice to hear from you, thank you for your comment.

Noah
Thank you my friend.  We have had quite a good summer here in Melbourne and we're expecting quite a few more hot days.

Sue
Thank you so much for your lovely words.

Maureen
It's always nice to hear from you and thanks for your lovely comment.

Bill
I'm so glad you liked my words and picture.

Richy
Long time, no see!  It's nice to see you again and thank you for your kind words.  All is fine here in the land of Oz.

suthern
I was so very moved by your lovely words, thank you so much.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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