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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-02-07 01:45 AM



"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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Richy
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1 posted 2004-02-07 02:37 AM




Wow, although I feel these exact same words
every time I’m out fishing... something tells
me you’re not talking about actual worms,
and hooks Snow  

But you know, even fish bones can be used
to help make a beautiful flower grow...

And besides, since there’s a chance that
our wishes are going to be turned down
anyway. Then I guess the beach is as nice
a place as any, to have that happen...

Thanks for the wonderful late night
reading Snow

This poem was very insightful


Richy  


Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
2 posted 2004-02-07 02:44 AM


fishbones and flowers eh ?
hmm.... i think i'm going to
have to research that one.

.... thanks richy, your
thoughts and kindness are
truly felt..

snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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3 posted 2004-02-07 02:45 AM


Mmm I see a lot of sea pieces being penned this week. 8-) This is great Snow. Short, sweet, and simple. A perfect blend. Did someone just say blend? Mmmm coffee! Java here I come.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Richy
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4 posted 2004-02-07 02:56 AM




Oh sure... I remember learning that in grade school...

I still remember seeing a picture of those
friendly native Americans,  showing  
all of the Europeans who discovered this
place (?) how to place a few kernels of corn
into a hole and then drop in a little fish skeleton for fertilizer...

Lucky for the natives, these new settlers
survived the winter... ! ...




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5 posted 2004-02-07 01:34 PM




(big angel hugs) This is so very sad and poignant, sweet friend, you deserve not to be bait to anything so wear iridescence as you slip by Neptune and reach the agate shores, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Snow, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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