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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-02-06 07:59 PM




My love plays on,
like a symphony,  
Yet, you keep me out,
alone and lonely.

Love should be soft,
to one's ears.
Love does not,
play on another's fears.

I've done allot,
for your kids and you.
No other would of stayed,
with all I've been through.

I am not saying,
that all has been bad.
There has been allot of good,
you seem to enjoy making me sad.

I feel bad for,
I don't do much anymore.
Of all the extras,
since you closed the door.

I loved, I forgave,
I lost allot of sleep.
I laughed, I cried,
now I mostly weep.

The only song, I seem to hear,
are ones that are sad.
To keep me distant,
you push for mad.

Your defense is,
way too strong.
To ever allow us,
to get along.

I wish you would love me,
as I do you.
Open your heart,
you'll see whats true.

I am sorry if you think,
I am saying your bad.
I'm not, when you do,
it makes me sad.

I wish you would,
try to get along.
Appreciate my love,
we could make a beautiful song.

I love you,
for who you are.
Beautiful, bright,
just like a star.

Please don't feel,
you can't talk to me.
I am your friend,
just trust, you'll see.


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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-02-06 08:50 PM


Sadness but not without hope.
Beautiful and heartfelt!
Love, Margherita

MGROVES
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2 posted 2004-02-06 09:05 PM


thankyou for your reply. and seeing it as it is. i write for a certain person, but it is only seen as hate from him.  hopefully my writings, with your replys can make him see reality    thankyou from my heart


Bill Charles
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3 posted 2004-02-06 09:08 PM


MGROVES - sadness I read in this writing, but their is always hope that things will be different...

BC

Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2004-02-06 09:13 PM


very sad but nice writting keep it up!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


garysgirl
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5 posted 2004-02-06 09:24 PM


I wish you would,
try to get along.
Appreciate my love,
we could make a beautiful song.

I love you,
for who you are.
Beautiful, bright,
just like a star.

Please don't feel,
you can't talk to me.
I am your friend,
just trust, you'll see.


MGROVES, this is so sad, but still such
a beautiful plea......
If this is your own hearts cry, I hope that
your other listens.
Hugs  
Ethel

iliana
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6 posted 2004-02-06 09:26 PM


MGroves -- this is a heart-felt write and I hope you find that love you're seeking.  
MGROVES
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7 posted 2004-02-06 09:38 PM


yes this is my hearts cry, i tried to show him this and the replys, he still says he only sees hate from mel. just to take my talen away i supose, or how he would feel if done to hime what he's done
Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2004-02-07 12:44 PM




(big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have a heart that has so much love to give and one very special someone is finding just this person...you! (sigh) I send angel comfort hugs your way, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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