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vandana
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0 posted 2004-02-06 04:59 PM



Tell her,
Tell her
How you feel about her?
Tell her,
Before It is too late
Before,
New dawn fades,
It again
Tell her,
It is time
for her to know
Tell her
You love her so much
Don't want to lose her,
Tell her,
That your love is strong.
Never been wrong for her,
There is something about her,
The way she walks
The way she talks
Tell her everything
Tell her,
Tell her
how you feel for her touch?
Let the night night long
Let the the time so right,
Let her know
How much you love her?
Show your feelings to her,
Tell her everything......


© Copyright 2004 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-02-06 05:44 PM


VanDana~
Just lovely dear~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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iliana
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2 posted 2004-02-06 05:50 PM


Yep, better tell her.  Enjoyed.
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2004-02-06 06:39 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, love should always be shared and expressed and so may it always be revealed like rainbows, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2004-02-06 07:27 PM


Hope he tells her the words every woman wants to hear!

Nice write ... Hugs, Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.


Margherita
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5 posted 2004-02-06 07:27 PM


Yes I do agree, dear vandana. When we love we should tell!

Just today we talked about this. A young colleague of mine is in love, but the words "I love you" have never been expressed between her and her boyfriend. I think I could show her your poem? Why wait to express feelings?

Lovely write and definitely good advice!
Love, Margherita

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2004-02-08 07:00 PM


I have been thinking about the very same thing....
before it's too late.

Nice one vandana~

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7 posted 2004-02-08 07:02 PM


How very well expressed Vandana!
Well done!
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-02-10 05:22 PM


Yes, and just hope the other feels the same way...or wants to...James
MGROVES
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9 posted 2004-02-21 06:05 PM


tell her
tell her that you love her
tell her
tell her  that you need her
tell her
tell her  that you'll never leave her
tell her
tell her right now
so many people loose on good things in life as fear keeps all away


Sadelite
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10 posted 2004-02-21 07:38 PM


This spoke to me...  Yes, tell her.
Grover
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11 posted 2004-02-21 07:51 PM


Yes, I have to be reminded every once in a while to "tell her!" Grover.
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