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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
To love as nothing. To grasp assurance in loosened fingers...unafraid of what may fall. To vanish in our reach. As if our arms extend in the farthest reaches of our dreams. And yet we are not absent from this final touch. We are the kiss of air beneath the reach of fingers. To have nothing left to say. To speak with wordless tongues that ache from a taste of deeper stillness. To love as nothing. As only this... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We are the kiss of air beneath the reach of fingers. To have nothing left to say. ~*~ When silence carries the warm. Eric...this is just wonderful. Thank you! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
And yet we are not absent from this final touch. We are the kiss of air beneath the reach of fingers. This is amazing writing, Eric. Just beautiful!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc A delight to read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"We are the kiss of air beneath the reach of fingers. To have nothing left to say." Speechless here.... Exquisite...that is the first word I can utter. Hugs~Nancy ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I'm speechless |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric "To love as nothing. As only this..." You do have a way of saying it like no other! |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
"To grasp assurance in loosened fingers...unafraid of what may fall." Powerfully beautiful write! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ 'To speak with wordless tongues that ache from a taste of deeper stillness.' *sighs* of realize~ Tender are your thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, keep reaching for the air beyond your fingertips and you will feel the stars, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
This was so deep and mesmerizing. I loved every word. Kie |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To vanish in our reach ...and to dissolve in the final touch, becoming Love in its purest essence, enhaling each other, exchanging our divine breath of life and sharing the sweet stillness of knowing ... just knowing As only this ... Wonderfully inspiring, dear Eric. I love you. Margherita  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ericc -- amazing writing; an aspiration perhaps only the truly wise can reach, I think! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ericc - great write, liked this one... BC |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Oh, Merlin...your vision of Truth is just so incredibly magical...only you could express this in such a mesmerizing way. Thank you seems so inadequate. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"We are the kiss of air beneath the reach of fingers." I realize that others have commented on this, but this is a really good line |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful! ~~**~~ |
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