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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2004-02-04 09:44 PM

Welcome dear moon to my night,
the last of a life I find
in the shadows of one uncertain
loss after another, complete me.
Welcome your light to my mind,
what forgives me is nothing in time
not the stars nor the wind
nor the falling rain, undo me.
Welcome your calming rise,
to the edge I find my sight
on the way to become one breath
that fails me now, 'tis death.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-04 09:51 PM

A beautiful poem. Grover.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2004-02-04 10:11 PM

Welcome your light to my mind,
what forgives me is nothing in time
not the stars nor the wind
nor the falling rain, undo me.
Welcome your calming rise,
to the edge I find my sight
on the way to become one breath
that fails me now, 'tis death.
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(hey you)

Not even the wind ???

Could you write anymore beautifully???
been too long since my eyes read you dear poet of the wind...
stunning write MG.

There is a pleasure in the pathless woods.
There is a rapture on the lonely shore.
I love not man the less ... but Nature more.

Lord Byron

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-02-04 10:35 PM

(big angel hugs) This is so wonderfully detailed, sweet friend, God Bless You, my heart goes out to you and I hope all has been well for you, you have been missed here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-02-04 10:51 PM

Michael, you've been too long gone...
welcome home!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

5 posted 2004-02-04 11:52 PM

this struck a deep chord with me....
and i found the writing to be what
poetry is all about.

snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

6 posted 2004-02-05 12:00 PM

Thank you, most kind of you all.... it has been a bit of time. And dear JM, how I have missed you too.........

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2004-02-05 06:39 AM

Loved it

~ARH

love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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