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Youngatheart
Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

0 posted 2004-02-04 08:44 PM

51 Minutes

talk talk talk-
memories and what ifs
thoughtful silence and the music played on
and what are you thinking?
tick tick tick

one tear, one little tear and he noticed
he brushed it away and held her
where were the words of comfort?
he had none to give her
he had none to give himself
and what are you thinking?
tick tick tick

guilt, fear, fire, need-
all too powerful to ignore
but one will win over the others
do you know what you are getting into?
she is deaf to the warning and closes her eyes
lips, so familiar meet, "so soft"
they have been there before and will be again
her dream, her forever dream
and what are you thinking?
tick tick tick

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-04 08:52 PM

Great poem. (although I did trip over the line, "but one will one over the others")

Youngatheart
Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

2 posted 2004-02-04 09:18 PM

ooops, my error, thank you!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-02-04 10:43 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so beautifully and emotively written, sweet friend, it is moments like these where so much can happen suddenly and magic is about, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and liht always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

4 posted 2004-02-05 08:05 AM

It sounds like a lot of things were happening at the same time - beautifully composed here - well done, Youngster.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-02-05 08:14 AM

I enjoyed this read...very well done

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2004-02-05 09:42 AM

Takes your mind a million different directions,,,,but the heart only one
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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