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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-01-25 11:05 AM

Silence of day bring ponder on silver wings,
wings that touch the heaven's winds as a
mind stirs relentlessly the broth of life.

A sip telling of what is needed,  for sugar brings
happiness and salt spreads bitterness...Such
bittersweet taste when the air simply breathes
without sound.

Each mile oft forgotten as casks filled with past
thought shake and slosh....spilling mere
droplets of what was upon the worn shoes of a
traveler.

Let the path wander briefly that one might learn,
let the shoes wear that one might humbly walk
on the tenderness of soles naked to truth,
thirsting of what lies spilled before him.

Give to me this wandering soul,  that I might smile
into the lifeless eyes of yesterday.  That I might
again rekindle the fire of dreams and smoulder into
the night skies....as tendrils of what might be
flow before me...

Let me taste the vintage of trangressions wine.
Let the swill of a droplet coat the silent tongue
and bring forth the spring of knowledge,  of hope
and future dreams...that I might live.

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

1 posted 2004-01-25 11:12 AM

glorious prayer-like quality in this one, my friend, suiting of the moment...

enjoyed!

McLean

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-01-25 11:43 AM

Magnus~
Such a beauty of thought~

'Give to me this wandering soul, that I might smile
into the lifeless eyes of yesterday. That I might
again rekindle the fire of dreams and smoulder into
the night skies....as tendrils of what might be
flow before me...'

Ahhhhhhh, this sates my Sunday morning poetic thirst~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2004-01-25 11:48 AM

And yet.... salt brings out the flavor of what is there, unless there's an excess of it... and sugar may only cover the taste with its own.

A "thinker" you've written here... glad I stopped in!

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Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

4 posted 2004-01-25 11:56 AM

Breathing this one in hope your words of wisdom will settle in my soul.

Patricia

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2004-01-25 07:06 PM

(smiles) And there's the nectar, the sugarcane, the honeycomb, all where the natural selection of joy can be tasted! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, puree it all together and serve, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-02-24 12:05 PM

Oh, Barry, this is certainly where pondering flys sometimes -- I do a bit of that myself -- very well put!

........jo

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

7 posted 2004-02-24 03:22 AM

Can only add wow.

Jason

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-02-24 04:07 AM

this is kinda sad Barry

but there is light

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-02-24 08:58 AM

Magnus, this write just made me want to give you a great big hug and say, everythings going to be fine...

What a heartfelt lovely write....you are a very sensitive man....and I like that. I wish more men saw and felt what you do, and perhaps they do, but are afraid to show it. I think women are basically looking for their best friend and it would be nice to listen to a man who can express himself..share his goals, failures...successes, fears...

Awesome write Mr.!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

10 posted 2004-02-24 10:12 AM

And all shall be well my friend ...

A wonderful write. hugs, Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2004-02-26 10:14 PM

Let me taste the vintage of trangressions wine.
Let the swill of a droplet coat the silent tongue
and bring forth the spring of knowledge, of hope
and future dreams...that I might live.

Your poem is stirring and beautifully put into words.

Nice work Barry~

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