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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2004-02-04 01:02 PM

Fire flickering in peaceful sight
Embers of red, shades of dancing light
Eyes that take in, but do not see
For through the flames, you do flee

Drifting from the close of room
As tapestry of life clicks on the loom
To touch the weave of ever before
With memories swirl, through past’s door

As if only yesterday, you saw the smile
And thought of times of linger while
Fresh and warm as the summer breeze
You drift along in heartstrings tease

In youth and health you did abide
Back on the paths where you did stride
Wondering on the route you took
If it been different with another look

Then you smile as the fire does play
For the choices made along the way
Some were good and some were bad
But better to smile than feel the sad

The warmth you feel as you bank the coal
Is more inside where dwells the soul
For always behind the red siren’s call
Is the door to the past in memory recall

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-02-04 01:11 PM

Drifting from the close of room
As tapestry of life clicks on the loom
To touch the weave of ever before
With memories swirl, through past’s door

~*~

As ever was, and all is well with you, then...we have missed you. Welcome home.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-02-04 01:12 PM

Very well written. Enjoyed this. Grover.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-02-04 01:21 PM

"Drifting from the close of room
As tapestry of life clicks on the loom
To touch the weave of ever before
With memories swirl, through past’s door

As if only yesterday, you saw the smile
And thought of times of linger while
Fresh and warm as the summer breeze
You drift along in heartstrings tease"

Ah dear Logan, so good to have you home.
I had better watch myself or I will have
copied the entire piece while looking for
my favourite lines.
Beautifully penned..you are missed.
What was, is, and is, ever was
and ever it be, as ever it does..
~Soft Smiles, Leighgirl~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-02-04 04:38 PM

Logan...It is always so good to see you here with your wisdom of as ever was. Hug!

Kie
Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 77
USA

5 posted 2004-02-04 05:04 PM

I have nothing but praise for this poem. It was excellent all around. I commend you. Kie

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