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Jack- In- The- Green
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The green woodlands.

0 posted 2004-02-04 05:19 AM


My dearest love,
this Valentine is sent to you,
with all of my love, and all of my being,

Hoping that it will make and mark our first Valentines together so special,
keeping you happy, smiling and joy in everything you are seeing,

Please think of me with love,
pure, warm love,
and everlasting as I do you,

You and your beautiful face,
I will have in my mind,
On this day of love and happiness,

For our love will be endless,
with such bliss...
forever....timeless!


(This was a poem I had written years ago for my wife on our first Valentines day together, I am not much for love poetry. Since it was Close to Valentines day I thought I would share this.)

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suthern
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1 posted 2004-02-04 10:47 AM


Please think of me with love,
pure, warm love,
and everlasting as I do you,

You and your beautiful face,
I will have in my mind,
On this day of love and happiness,

How lovely this is... she's a lucky lady! *S* Welcome to Passions! *S*

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2004-02-04 11:50 AM


Timeless ... yes.
Beautiful.
Margherita

Ludo
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since 2004-01-29
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3 posted 2004-02-04 12:08 PM


Unique ending, with the "..timeless".
Likeably different though.

Extremely fitting for Valentines day, a nice write

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-02-04 12:23 PM


Jack,
Beautifully done, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-02-04 01:01 PM


thanks for sharing

I'm not into love poetry either...but now and then, it touches my heart

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-02-04 01:37 PM


Oh my!!  How beautiful...
What a lucky lady she is!
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
7 posted 2004-02-04 01:41 PM


Good... love poetry is refreshing now and again. Grover.
iliana
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USA
8 posted 2004-02-06 12:13 PM


Jack -- this was truly a beautiful Valentine for your wife!
ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
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India
9 posted 2004-02-06 07:19 AM


thanks for sharing it.lovely poem
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
10 posted 2004-02-06 07:28 AM


First Valentine's Days are special...
nice that you saved and remembered yours
*s
M

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2004-02-07 01:23 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, your special Valentine is going to love this forever, yay, God Bless You and may the cupids forever shower blessings on you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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