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The Hermit (duet with Michelle_loves_Mike)
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The Hermit (duet with Michelle_loves_Mike) |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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I heard a sound Voices in the night Echoing... reflecting Reminders of my past Ghosts of my future Haunting me Drawing me through Reliving the now whisper to me... I stood alone Sharing my secrets To the Void Freely they spoke Conjuring their reality listen... I search their words Wisdom of the ages Beckoning... Drawing forth my soul A candle in the breeze Flickering... glowing Lighting the path I alone must face Revelations surround me Teasing... promising Confusions not resolved As the future journeys into past But now the animal is in pain... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A nice collaboration, excellent blending. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful accomplishment. Please du-et again. ~Hugs to you both~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome duet my friends. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice imagery! Grover. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is such a wonderfully heartfelt duet, sweet friends, there certainly are too many hermits still yet their voices ring true to our ears and they are never recluses as they speak with deep heart and truth! (big angel hugs) These are powerful words of wisdom and emotion, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Bradly and Michelle, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I would like to take this time to publicly thank my partner... this was quite an enjoyable experience... Magnus- Thank you. Nancy- Thank you very much. We are planning another in the future. loner- Thanks for the kind words. Grover- I'm glad you enjoyed it. Noah- You are always so kind. Thank you. But now the animal is in pain... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You write well together. *S* I enjoyed this poetic collaboration very much! *S* |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Such wonderful words of encouragement, from all of you,,,thank you very much. It was fun, and very enjoyable working with Ringo,,,he's the best. Thanks partner,,,,looking forward to our next one,,,,, hugs to all two to Ringo Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Alby New Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 4lost in space |
you two work pretty good together Mike Love you Michelle |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This really sounded like one person not two -- so I would say that's a pretty darn good duet! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Thank you iliana,,,,we've been known to be on the same wavelength more than once, lol Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Seamless! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice duet  |
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