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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-02-03 12:17 PM



There is no distance.

Only the space of unmet desires
as the ocean to our
shores.

Yet tides roll in a reach of
pleasure.

And through this taste of holy
water...

We touch.


© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-03 12:21 PM


Very nice poem. Grover.
McLean
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state of marital bliss
2 posted 2004-02-03 12:22 PM


"holy water"...

I really like that!

McLean

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-03 12:30 PM


how sensual and soft
cinnamongirl
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4 posted 2004-02-03 12:31 PM


And as always, the divine grace of your words have touched me.  Thank you for this gentle caress of the soul.

I love you,

Moca

iliana
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5 posted 2004-02-03 01:34 PM


Awwwhhhhh......this was magical!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-02-03 03:46 PM


Beautiful as always Eric...
Your writing is....
  
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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7 posted 2004-02-03 04:18 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may you always feel the ebb of loves soft passion caress your agate shores, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2004-02-03 04:29 PM


I can only echo here...
Your talent is amazing. TD

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2004-02-03 04:44 PM


Beautiful metaphors, Eric.  Just the right amount of words.  Good work!

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2004-02-03 05:25 PM


I agree with Mark..nice writing and meaning Eric
*s
M

Margherita
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11 posted 2004-02-04 10:48 AM


.... and this touch is magical.

Your words are born in upper space where truth and beauty embrace.

I love you.
Margherita

HopeS
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12 posted 2004-02-04 11:57 AM


Ericc , this was so softly  "touching
Hope

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13 posted 2004-02-04 12:37 PM


nice imagery..."holy water" is indeed a gem
jaicie114
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14 posted 2004-02-08 11:16 PM


Amazing, Merlin...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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15 posted 2004-02-09 12:27 PM


sigh....amazing sir...

~~**~~
You read before you words I write-
See before you my soul,
spinning on  waves of thought,
painting memories of time

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16 posted 2004-02-10 11:53 AM


Oh, yesssss. *S*
JamesMichael
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17 posted 2004-02-11 07:06 PM


Enjoyed...James
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