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CUPID HAS A CROOKED ARROW
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CUPID HAS A CROOKED ARROW |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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Cupid Has A Crooked Arrow You have eyes for that pretty little girl Blond curls and crystal clear blue eyes A sexy little walk and dimples with a friendly smile She gives you the eye then says we’re friends But that little ole arrow of cupids hits the dog She follows you around the house with stars in her eyes She sits on your lap, gives you a doggy kiss True love, friends, true love. Now that little ole cupid is just a babe How can he shoot that ole arrow properly? Now down the street is this little ole sexy dreamboat Tall, slender, muscles all in the right places Twinkling eyes, a drop dead smile A slight British accent, upper class Now here comes that baby , his diaper a hangin’ low Wham! He hits the little ole man next door Poor man can hardly walk, but he thinks he a dashing Romeo Flashing a toothless smile and exhaling his drop dead breath I keep a tellin’ ya Watch out for that little ole babe cause he keeps a shootin’ those little ole crooked arrows. Watch out, watch out, here he comes Oh! No! He just hit an elephant Run! Love Bon-Bon  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Bonnie this was fun , I must drag my humourous Cupid poem out I wrote in the past because I feel much the same , Cupid is hopeless with his aim Hope |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Your wit is something else, Bonbon... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie A delight to read, enjoyed. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Some good lines make up this great poem. Grover. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehehe! What an ending! love this! |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
 Humorous and a great smile today I needed!McLean |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
lol! You, silly BonBon, you! Made my day! .........hugs, jo |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is just too funny...and the mental picture the ending conjures up is priceless...thank you for a great lunch time laugh |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles) This is soooooooo cute, sweet friend, hehehe, yay, the cupid missed but hit the devil and now he's nice, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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