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pammy
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since 2003-11-27
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0 posted 2004-02-02 11:45 PM


This is what you are,
and what you'll alwyas be.
I'm so sure we will never part,
No one will love youmore than me.

"What am I to you?" you ask,
Well I shall tell you.
When you're around I can throw away the mask,
When we're together, anything we can do.

You're always here when you are needed,
You're always wlling to help.
Our love is strung like a necklace that was beaded,
and worn forever, never to break.

Thank you now and always,
You are the best there could be.
Without you, I would wander the empty hallways,
You have definately saved me.

Now I will tell you what you are.
You are my friend and thats not all,
You are a beautiful person and you raise the bar,
I wanna be lke you( but maybe not that tall)

© Copyright 2004 Pamela Elizabeth! - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-02-02 11:57 PM


What a sweet poem and what a really good Valentine present it would make!
McLean
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
2 posted 2004-02-03 12:11 PM


Sweet words, my passionate friend.  

McLean

Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
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3 posted 2004-02-03 02:53 AM


Such a sweet compliment to any friend or lover
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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4 posted 2004-02-04 12:08 PM



Such lovely sentiments, Pammy...

I enjoyed reading this...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

celestecat
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since 2004-02-02
Posts 29

5 posted 2004-02-04 12:52 PM


Lol I liked this one. Very genuine.
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-02-04 02:10 AM


very sweet (and I love the ending)
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