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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-02-02 11:34 PM


When I close my eyes
I can picture you
So perfectly

I can picture everything
From your dark brown eyes
And muscular chest
Down to your bare feet

When I close my eyes
I feel the warmth of your body
So close to mine
So close
That I can feel the heat radiate

When I close my eyes
I can feel your lips
Softly brush against mine
And at times
Your lips kiss mine so passionaitely
I can't get my breathe
For what seems like an eternity

When I close my eyes
You are mine
To have and to hold
Like a threefold cord
That never can be broke

When I close my eyes
I feel the passion
The love

When I close my eyes


Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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Canada
1 posted 2004-02-02 11:38 PM


I'd know that feeling.

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
2 posted 2004-02-03 12:05 PM


This is a good one for reposting for Valentine's Day!  Sounds like true love to me!
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since 2003-01-03
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3 posted 2004-02-03 02:22 AM


sigh...brings to mind sweet images of my own love, Beautiful write.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-02-03 03:15 AM


Oh yes,,,to visualize my Mikey,,,from his natural neon blonde hair, to ice blue eyes, to cute round,,,,,,well, you get it,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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