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unwantedspork
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since 2004-02-02
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0 posted 2004-02-02 10:49 PM



Im never good enough.

It seems the world a blur,
Im trying to fit in
I cant see the end
Of this whorl wind.
My mother thinks im too fat,
My brother thinks im to slutty
My sister thinks im too good
My dad thinks its called insanity.
I don’t think I fit in at all.
Im never good enough for you,
Im never what I seem
Though, is it really me?
I cant seem to see.
Behind this mask ive had for too long.
If I only try, I say
If only I work harder
I stop eating, stop singing,
Stop cheering for my soul.
And as my parents, friends and family get happier,
I die.
More and more my soul leaves me, drained
By those who fit in.
By those who hide.
________
ok this one i just wrote. No reason at all, I made no changes, just making it free. Its different, not me, and again not one of my better ones.

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wordwizard
Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483
on the way to next world
1 posted 2004-02-02 11:04 PM


you're always as good as what you think of yourself so be positive, life is difficult without you becoming absorbed in what people say...and yet change is important


unwantedspork
Junior Member
since 2004-02-02
Posts 24

2 posted 2004-02-02 11:06 PM


I really agree, but I really change my writtings. I can start with something be about love, and then turn and tist it into being about a fly. Im serious! Im that bad. So this was kinda, a, Leave it alone or else sorta thing. Im mean, why else would ideas jump into your head? lol
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