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Open Poetry #31

Lola (Desires of Bliss)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-01-29 05:58 PM

Lola (Desires of Bliss)

Physically, we are years apart.
Sensually, my lips could caress
her quite well if she would move
just a little closer to my heart.
I doubt that our lips would count
the years in the middle of a kiss.
Yet, I know that somewhere down
the road, I would pay the price
for these desires of bliss.

JamesLee
January28
2004

J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

1 posted 2004-01-29 08:10 PM

such passion...loved this part-- "I doubt that our lips would count the years in the middle of a kiss"... indeed, once we are wrapped up by our passions, we forget some of life's irksome details

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2004-01-29 09:10 PM

(sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, you always have the most romantic thoughts, sometimes we do pay the price but one is well worth it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-01-29 09:15 PM

A unique concept in subject... a very good write! Grover.

KristieSue

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since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

4 posted 2004-02-02 10:50 AM

love this James...passion surpasses MANY Things....

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