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PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-02-01 08:29 PM

There is a storm deep within my torn heart
releasing its fury when ever we're apart.
It's torrential down pours flood my mind,
with memories I thought I'd never find.
Lightning strikes my soul, sparking new calmness,
as my soul meditates on your loveliness.
Thunder echoes heated, passionate love,
for the one God chose to descend from above.
Wind blows my spirit in a new direction
as I bask in beauties reflection,
that heaven casts across my now blue sky,
once the storm of my heart has run dry.
That's when standing in awe of devastation,
my battered heart gives it's own confession.
"Maybe its the sense of longing for you
that won't allow my true skies to shine through."

[This message has been edited by PassionatelyRomantic (02-02-2004 04:57 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2004-02-01 08:39 PM

(big angel hugs) Despite there being heartache and deceit in love sometimes, I'm taking my chances as I know He has a plan and there will be one true love, yay, God Bless You, this is most wonderfully written, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-02-01 11:43 PM

I think you chose a good name for yourself based on your poem. Welcome to Passions!

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

3 posted 2004-02-02 10:16 AM

thank you for your kind words

luvrsheart
New Member

since 2004-01-25

Posts 7

4 posted 2004-02-02 10:21 AM

I like this one a lot. Much better then your previous.

Kie
Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 77
USA

5 posted 2004-02-02 11:06 AM

Beautiul & sublime.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2004-02-02 07:56 PM

PassionatelyRomantic - a sadness I sense when I read this writing, well done with feeling...

BC

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