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VOID (acrostic -three words)
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VOID (acrostic -three words) |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Maddened bye tears [This message has been edited by Sadelite (01-31-2004 05:51 PM).] |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i havent seen an acrostic done this way! i actually think its quite nice.... ...took me a moment to fiqure out what you were saying...so i just said it out loud and heard...MT..empty. i enjoyed this!  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What power in three little words! Excellent and creative voice of the acrostic! TD |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, this is soooooo original, sweet friend, I've never seen an acrostic like this but it certainly qualifies, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sadelite, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
takes a very clever mind to come up with an idea like this.....nice. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I never knew about this form before. Very good use of it!!! Grover. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Muted, I'm glad you took the time to say it aloud and were able to enjoy it. Words are sure fun to play with aren't they muted? ~Sadelite~ This Diamond, You've flattered me with your words. Thank you, Diamond. ~Sadelite~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Noah, I'm glad you thought it was orginal. It wasn't planned to be--just kinda happened. Thank you for your nice comment. ~Sadelite~ Balladeer, Thank you, but, "No, I'm not clever, just la-z!" (You do know how to make a person feel better, don't you... thank you...) ~Sadelite~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
iliana, Glad ya think so... Sadelite |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
I'm going to do some research on this form, dear...and I'll have to get back to you with a proper response. This doesn't have anything to do with Maddened Cow Disease, does it? I'd be crying tears of Good-bye, too, if I had that. HA!  McLean |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
McLean, No maddened cow disease here but we do run a small herd about ten cows! I don't know if there's such a form or not-I just took the liberty of poetic pen, abbreviating "empty" to the emptiest form of the word. If there's no such form, then I'll call it Cathy's Abbreviated Acrostical form, CAAF. (I get all "choked" up even thinking about it, "CAAF, CAAf." I know--bad humor. I exercise it regularly!) I'm curious as to the results of your research or even how one would go about researching it. Thank you in advance for taking the time to do so. I just play with the words and have very little real knowledge of the way they're supposed to work. If there is no such form in existence, perhaps we've experienced a first. ~Sadie~ |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
nifty Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I C clever...excellent |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
now THAT is minimalism bravo though the acrostic escapes me either way well done, 3 words can pack a powerful punch |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done.. MT being of course the idea... Empty... clever... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are the clever one! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty darn cool! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Maddened bye tears YES!!!...to the bone ~P |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
I love your art and way of thinking!!! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Michelle, Steavenr,Death, Capt. Hair, Sunshine, passing shadows, choshi, and Ravenwolfvoyager, Thank you all for taking time to comment on this. I value each and every one of you. Take care, Sadie |
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