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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-04-14 05:06 AM


That good friday morning.
Drowsily elapsed time away
to the call of a Chiffchaff.

Two crows perched above the road on a lampost.
Raucusly calling, portents of doom,
waiting for casualties.

Cranes towered above the crystal blue skyline.
Clanking, like mechanical dinousaurs,
the church clock rings 9.15.

Pleasant smell of hot cross buns.
Pervading the air with salivating aroma,
freshly baked and scrumptious.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-04-14 05:50 AM


Only the clock, no bells ..... they rang on Easter Sunday!
You caught the atmosphere, you were attentive.... and sensitive to the cross-buns.
Enjoyed.
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2004-04-14 06:56 AM


nice to see you here today...seems like ages
and this is a lovely read, i can smell those buns baking away!

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-04-14 12:53 PM


you observe well and take things in deeply
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