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swatcatpettus Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 57CA |
the skyline is so grey and dark, but so is my trust in you, the way you’ve dealt with me before, makes me want to say we’re through i don’t if I should call it quits, my love for you is just too strong, i don’t if can take more pain, it’s been hurting me for oh too long |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
aww, cheer up. Hopefully its not as bad as it sounds. Beautiful write. ~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
why don't you ever title your poetry? |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
should you stay or should you go I sense the emotions going to and fro Hope |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Love can be strange...but to ask these questions solidifies the fact that it is present. Sometimes the answer comes with the acceptance. Most often, the straight path is most clear, with the most clean of effects...Just my observation. Well done TD |
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