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exhale
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Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-01-31 01:04 AM


a broken record playing
over
and over
and over
i'm feeling so insecure these days
used and abused
do you really need me
like i need you
i'm not good enough to be here
i'm so unique..
i wish i were
oh god
i wish i were
you don't know what i do
to feel like i belong here
ignore me
i'm just invisable
see right through me
i'm not here
after trying to hard to be seen
i think i've faded..



© Copyright 2004 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-01-31 02:33 AM


I see you Chelsea and you are bright with words of poetry, as a poet , you made me feel what your going through, great job!

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

aujussy wolf
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2 posted 2004-01-31 05:08 AM


ahh i have felt this way many times its all good though
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-01-31 05:09 AM


this one aches deeply, and I know how it feels
Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-01-31 02:23 PM


We've all been there,,and we all want to get as much as we give in a relationship,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2004-01-31 02:49 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Chelsea, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, I believe true happiness must begin within ones self before one spreads it, and that makes you seen as your smile and tears can be easily felt by another! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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