nd Rented for Your Heart Came from here and is finished

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Open Poetry #31

nd Rented for Your Heart Came from here and is finished

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-04-11 03:38 PM

Emerald Kicking sand
into a forgotten place
to remember when beauty
was something to plan
On a mindful image

knowing
you chose
somewhere
away
knowing
exploring
an end to others who sought
to use you for

images
In a Summer you watched the world fail

to find you with
your long hair
and smile

but will the world wait as it did before

and leave your rough trees
old wall
haven

rented

for your heart

and peace

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-04-11 03:49 PM

Dave, your poem intrigues me. What is the background behind it? I so enjoy reading your work.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

2 posted 2004-04-11 04:28 PM

Yes, I would like to know about this piece as well. Enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2004-04-11 05:06 PM

would like some understanding too...why is the title cut off at the beginning?

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

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Michigan

4 posted 2004-04-11 08:44 PM

I'm with the others on this one.
This is one interesting poem.
I enjoy reading your poetry.

:-)

Froggy

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2004-04-12 12:16 PM

Dave?

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-04-12 04:29 PM

Yeah Dave, what's the liner made of in this package?

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2004-04-15 08:18 PM

interesting

MGROVES

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california

8 posted 2004-04-15 08:19 PM

interesting

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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9 posted 2004-04-23 05:20 PM

It obviously sounds a bit stupid to say I dont write on the site when I do read the poetry and manners make me respond at least to finish off the comments on my writting.

Manners means I respond to those who commented on the words I have written, and that is what I am doing.

Dave
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The background is fading beauty, someone who wanted to take a break; to get off the world and let it spin around without her.

Just going somewhere and enjoying isolation but someone who hadn't lost themselves in the adoration.

She knew she would drift into penniless begging or be dragged back into someone else controlling her life.

There is no known person in these words.

Dave

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2004-04-26 02:59 AM

Thanks for your explanation, Dave. Now it makes a lot of sense to me and enjoyed it even more.

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

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Realm of Supernatural

11 posted 2007-11-11 12:54 PM

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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