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Enotneicna
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0 posted 2004-04-09 12:29 PM



dispirited
.
sad times coming
try to rise above
the disrupting vibration
striking cord upon cord
compose a musical
scored from the depths of being
to touch the foundation of existence
tears flow
to touch the foundation of existence
scored from the depths of being
compose a musical
striking cord upon cord
the disrupting vibration
try to rise above
sad time coming
.
Enotneicna
SLW
4-8-04

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno



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aujussy wolf
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1 posted 2004-04-09 01:52 AM


wonderful i love your style ...a good song indeed ...

.......
JDW III

Enotneicna
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2 posted 2004-04-09 03:07 AM


thanks you muchly

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno



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3 posted 2004-04-09 04:46 AM


yes...great style!
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4 posted 2004-04-09 08:30 AM


Very nice. I enjoyed this piece. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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5 posted 2004-04-09 10:14 AM


enjoyed


Enotneicna
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6 posted 2004-04-10 10:38 PM


passing shadows....thank you!

Nightshade...so glad you enjoyed!

MGROVES.....glad you enjoyed also!

this is mirrored poetry.....I believe the correct name for it is Palindrome!  It's fun!

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno



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