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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24
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0 posted 2004-04-05 01:47 AM



Oh such an unloving night to this wept,
that such a stage lives so unlovingly,
for each aspect, plays as memories kept,
and this heart, bleeds to your own memory.

To such a show, this heart lives captive,
that each actor, each scene does remind,
of once such a profound love, did live,
but now has left all but this mind.

Such a harsh world, to live to this,
that not even the void of night can relieve,
a heart, of love's burdern to reminisce;
(but love it not, nor love again lives to grieve).

So less of this world I wish for dreams,
yet even there, this love cannot escape-
for this heart is bound by love it seems;
so not even death removes love's drape.

So must I live, in such an existance,
that all that lives, is love's reminder,
and this world, nothing but a romance;
may with time, these thoughts grow kinder!

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2004-04-05 03:57 AM


Very very beautiful and so well written!
May this bond of love not keep your heart out of reach for new love.
Love, Margerita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2004-04-05 04:12 AM


wonderful ending lines! wraps up the write beautifully
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2004-04-05 11:17 AM


You capture the speech of the wind...
excellent.
TD

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