Open Poetry #31 |
Bound by Love |
PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
Oh such an unloving night to this wept, that such a stage lives so unlovingly, for each aspect, plays as memories kept, and this heart, bleeds to your own memory. To such a show, this heart lives captive, that each actor, each scene does remind, of once such a profound love, did live, but now has left all but this mind. Such a harsh world, to live to this, that not even the void of night can relieve, a heart, of love's burdern to reminisce; (but love it not, nor love again lives to grieve). So less of this world I wish for dreams, yet even there, this love cannot escape- for this heart is bound by love it seems; so not even death removes love's drape. So must I live, in such an existance, that all that lives, is love's reminder, and this world, nothing but a romance; may with time, these thoughts grow kinder! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very very beautiful and so well written! May this bond of love not keep your heart out of reach for new love. Love, Margerita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful ending lines! wraps up the write beautifully |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You capture the speech of the wind... excellent. TD |
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