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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2004-04-02 09:56 AM


Beloved
These gifts combine the seas of restless bidding
Finding out the all about connections fitting
Sensitive in rise and fall away that changes play
A shear of excess waves too tight to seam and pulled away

Ruffles on the summer dress of morn to surf the sunny sighs
Stepping in and out of the regress and pounding for the prize
What could be good as gold upon the shores caresses
Seems to foam in wanton smiles just as fast in vast recess

And all this feeling is to gather at the lips like sated sand
Every wave conveys the gentle longing in its open hand
While you drown in welled capitulations given gold
Though ocean deep, the spirit bold, warm engulf streams hold

Copyright Kkh 4/2/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2004-04-02 10:26 AM


yes so beautiful, it leaves a part of itself to
dance for the sands that thirst for its touch
beautiful sea song

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16
Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!
2 posted 2004-04-02 10:27 AM


This is a very beautiful poem.
I really enjoyed the rhythm and tone.
It certainly portrays your
feelings on love and romance!
What a kind soul you have!

^*Well done*^

^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression
3 posted 2004-04-02 10:44 AM


I always enjoy a well written poem about the Ocean
And this is one.

Gloom

vandana
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4 posted 2004-04-02 10:54 AM


nice
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2004-04-02 11:14 AM


This lovely and lilting poem rolls as rhythmically as the rolling tides...


EA

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-04-02 11:28 AM


I don't think there is anything that you can't write about
Grover
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London, ON, Canada
7 posted 2004-04-02 01:37 PM


Very pretty!
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