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Open Poetry #31

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Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2004-04-02 07:24 AM

  Her crimson dress
   wanders where
     the crispy Autumn leaves
      may go.
       She follows gently
        painting the town red.
         Her lips abloom
       with rose complexion
      her hair
     gently decorated
    with copper overtones.
    And yet
   she spells out danger.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2004-04-02 07:32 AM

Love the colors and the message.

A dangerous cover up........I'll keep on the watch for her.

I enjoyed the read.

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

zippi
Member

since 2004-03-31

Posts 56
California

2 posted 2004-04-02 08:12 AM

Caution, the lady in red is about!
What a fun poem!
Rene`

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-04-02 08:18 AM

Kim,
Good write, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-02 08:31 AM

wonderfully done! Love the format and the theme...excellent!

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

5 posted 2004-04-02 12:40 PM

Vivid! I see her right behind me...better watch out...

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-04-02 01:13 PM

Wow! Excellent!

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