a year maybe more - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Crimson Moon
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 52
NY, USA

0 posted 2004-03-29 11:00 AM

a year maybe more
since poetry fell
from fingers gone calm
warm clear breezes
washed chaos away
never for long enough
school was primary
now it fails me
I can't find focus
peace is barely daydream
words once strung together
fall off tarnished threads
a rickety mess of garble
tossed out of loss
so much loss lately
so many missed goodbyes
i fear hellos
beg no forgiveness
words and i parted ways
when i stood on my own
now i crumble to floor
searching for words long gone

A secret place high atop the forest hills and valleys touched by all you have been and content to be all that you are.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-29 11:56 AM

Very good... really liked the style!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-03-29 12:32 PM

you never parted ways

you are just walking circles around them, planting seeds of flowers that will sprout gardens in the midst of them...they are still there

love you muchly

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2004-03-29 04:04 PM

:

:

i understand. you convey your feelings well

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

4 posted 2004-03-29 04:42 PM

With all that has occurredin my life recently, this very well could have been written by me too. I connected with every word.

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-03-29 08:46 PM

i feel the ache in this...

Crimson Moon
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 52
NY, USA

6 posted 2004-03-29 11:47 PM

I'm glad i'm not the only one who feels this way. Thank you everyone for your support.

Love you too sis.

I was a poet once and now I flounder in shallow water searching for my lost voice.

Trew
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada

7 posted 2004-03-30 07:20 AM

I turn back to poetry, when times get tough, like an old friend that sometimes is taken for granted.

I turned back this time and she was gone. I swear, I have no idea where she went. I could've sworn I left here right over there. Huh...

Very nicely written, you struck a chord with me!

There are thoughts which are prayers.
There are moments when, whatever the posture of the body,
the soul is on its knees.

~~Victor Hugo~~

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

8 posted 2004-03-30 07:45 AM

The police have told me this before...(my lawyer too)....well Toe...a year...maybe more?.....interesting write....

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.