Forever I Shall Remember ( Corrected )

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Forever I Shall Remember ( Corrected )

HopeS
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0 posted 2004-03-29 04:37 AM

Forever I Shall Remember

I could never forget the past
We were hearts in touch
Memories are reminders
How we had shared so much

Once reached day and night
We became two of a kind
With joy, love and laughter
We shared in heart and mind

We took chances whenever
We ventured and dared
Having the keys to open
Heart and souls were bared

As I stroll through memories
Where once upon a time
Hearts made connection
Your thoughts matched mine

As my mind reflects the past
I keep retained in memory
Forever I shall remember
The times you shared with me

I value each heart sentiment
With thoughtful recollection
I hope you recall memories
With the same loving affection

Hope©2004

passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-03-29 04:51 AM

good either version

Midnitesun

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2 posted 2004-03-29 05:00 AM

hopefully, he will remember

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2004-03-29 05:18 AM

Vey nice writing Hope...thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

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Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2004-03-29 05:35 AM

Thanks Dixie for taking time to read both , decided to change the last verse , hoping he recalls memories seem to flow smoother

Hope

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2004-03-29 05:38 AM

thank you Kacy ... I shall send him the poem as a reminder
Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-03-29 05:40 AM

Thank you Phil for your kind , caring reply , it was much appreciated

Hope

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