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bbent
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0 posted 2004-03-28 07:03 PM



What it is

Floating weightless in the womb
Of nonexistence,
Contemplating the futility
Of resistance,
Canvassing the map of Is
For the state of matter.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

© Copyright 2004 Ray Conley - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-28 07:40 PM


cool!
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2 posted 2004-03-28 08:29 PM


      this is nice

            


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3 posted 2004-03-28 09:31 PM


*thinking*

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4 posted 2004-03-28 09:48 PM


So, what is it?
Does it matter?


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5 posted 2004-03-29 03:25 AM


Well, are you going to give us the answer??? Or, are you going to make us guess -- well, it's kind of fun guessing.... let's see.  Is it "thought?"  Is it "nothing?"  Is it "love?"  Enjoyed.  
bbent
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6 posted 2004-03-29 05:15 PM


Thanks all of you...funny somehow this started a right to life debate on another site when that concept never crossed my mind however can see where it could be interpreted in that way...was a Sunday and spent the morning listening to Phish so found my inspiration there however feel free to interpret it in any manner you find right for you.Thanks again for taking the time to read and reply.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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