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Grover
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0 posted 2004-01-29 05:25 PM



TRENDS

Below the thin grey line
A blitzed orange array
The flock of gulls decline
Out from a blue and crystal way
Where all fads and fashions
Constantly come but never stay.

Fire red: the horizon screams, mercy!

© Copyright 2004 Grover Gall - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-01-29 05:36 PM


Great imagery here, Grover!
BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2004-01-29 07:57 PM


Fabulous writing here Grover~
The horizon speaks for itself~
  

J.Samm
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3 posted 2004-01-29 08:17 PM


"The flock of gulls decline
Out from a blue and crystal way" -- very well said! a belated welcome to the forum. hope to see more of your work!

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-01-29 08:52 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Love the imagery in this piece.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

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5 posted 2004-01-29 09:27 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww! Oh my gosh, I love how you painted this beautiful scenery, sweet friend, hehehe, OK seagulls and pelicans, this adult swim session is over, time for the fireflies and owls! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, I can't wait to read more wonderful poetry from you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Grover, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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6 posted 2004-01-29 09:47 PM


Yes,  splendid imagery....would be a peaceful
scene on a cool summer's eve....as the
orange slowly sets into the darkened night.

garysgirl
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7 posted 2004-01-29 11:53 PM


Grover, you painted a picture with your words.
Just beautiful!!
Hugs  
Ethel

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8 posted 2004-01-30 03:53 AM


great thoughts!
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9 posted 2004-01-30 09:52 AM


Your imagery is captivating... and I'm a willing prisoner. *G* Excellent! *S*
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10 posted 2004-01-30 10:03 AM


this would be a fabulous painting!

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

wordwizard
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11 posted 2004-01-30 08:40 PM


lovely picture that you paint...and so fads set into the sunset


Grover
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12 posted 2004-01-30 08:54 PM


Thank-you all for your kind words of encouragement! Grover.
Yu Lan
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13 posted 2004-01-31 11:58 PM


It already IS a painting.. And you said you were a gruff kinda guy.. This is beautiful

Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^

Love - Lynne

iliana
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14 posted 2004-02-01 04:40 PM


Awesome!  Awesome!
Snow
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15 posted 2004-02-01 04:43 PM


ohhh bravo!!!

nothing i could say
would be enough.

simply... bravo!!
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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16 posted 2004-02-03 08:57 AM


Wow...!!!

Eric

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