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A Cricket Is On Mars
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A Cricket Is On Mars |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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A Cricket Is On Mars As cricket moves about on this land called Mars He begins to think he is a superstar With bright lights and glitter He can hear something titter He climbs high onto the mountaintop Looks down sees a fountain spewing soda pop Soda pop the colors of red, white, and blue He says let’s have a barbecue Then I can practice being on Broadway Now gentle readers you say these words are a little strange Well since cricket is a doin’ the writin’ And if you just traveled across the universe In the tail of a blasted rocketship Hurled though space coming to a crashing stop Let ole cricket tell you about strange Cause crickets need water or they hallucinate. Oh! Look! A cricket belly dancer Look at those veils Hallucinations I say Hallucinations Love Bon-Bon  |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Some really cool images-- funny and colorful!  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is definitely different. And different is good.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like it! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, whatcha got in your soda pop? Enjoyed this whimsical look at some of our follies. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love it!! Thanks for the smiles! Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LOL. BonBon, quite an imagination you have! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*giggle* cute |
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