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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2004-03-26 11:45 AM


Moonlight lit the depths of a darkened sky.
A cobblestone mockery of rockery laid insignificantly upon the disheveled ground.
Tranquil as the moment that has been near,
stalking in the dampened shadow of the who.

A mellow simplicity of the chocolatey delightment.
A narrow whip of time lost and won.
Blocked by the standard blockade of aparteid.
Wandering through a mind full of thoughts.
Time fell near.

Whispering, contentment, gratitude, thankfullness, sadness, ache, pain.
Thoughts trailing, some hurried along, others lingering, sticking around awhile, taking a seat. Pulling up a chair.

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

© Copyright 2004 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-03-26 12:04 PM


interesting write, Kellie
especially enjoyed that cobblestone mockery line

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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2 posted 2004-03-26 03:03 PM


Some nice images here, good write!
aujussy wolf
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3 posted 2004-03-26 11:11 PM


wow , your style flows strong , luv the strike of your words ...happy grad too

wolfy

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JDW III

iliana
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4 posted 2004-03-27 12:44 PM


Your style, Kellie, is quite refreshing!
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