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Stirred by Thoughts in the Wind
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Stirred by Thoughts in the Wind |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Like two star-crossed lovers in the presence of divinity Practicing mirth, springs and pours A song before wind-blown flowers Fragrant sapphire seas, vocal in places that cannot be seen I am stirred by the thoughts of wind Kissing my ear Ceaseless sighs roaming Like noon-time peaks of the sun Warm, tender, adequate Miracles gazing upon endless paths Showing me everywhere, meaning filled life There strolling across mystery All encompassing...we meet like wishful thinkers Our prayers ramble without stumbling Emotions find roots springing forth Voice becomes an intrapersonal communion with eager karma Man listens to the inner songs of cadence Happy voices present Like a Hallmark of creative integrity Perimeters of space and form Moving in and around, like two unfathomable bodies Embryonic narratives listening and confirming With laser precision Beaming across the interior plains Where ages flow into one another As transmigrations begins….there flows distance voices Silver light broke out and danced tenderly Willfully and true on the surface Lovers of nature, voices dictating promise Vigilant on behalf of sentiment Simply a spirit’s bright awakening with an intellect of euphoria Wondering sometimes How can I look at the heavens without you? |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Mother Nature does paint awe inspiring tapestries, both earth bound, and heavens wide Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I suppose I can imagine it still never getting to hold a girls hand yet, but I do believe it could be so much more beautiful looking up with a special someone! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lee, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lee, this is such a beautiful poem, so excellently written. I'm sending it back for another round. Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ "How can I look at the heavens without you?" Now that is a poem within itself. Wonderful write. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A well disciplined writer-- you display much bounty in the fruits of your labor! Grover. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhLee~ So very artfully done .... you are such a pleasure to read~ 'How can I look at the heavens without you?' Oh my ... this stirs the ink-of-think~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
LeeJ., Wonderfully written,filled with beauty and optimism, despite the absence mentioned. What a beautiful poem! Sadelite |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Our prayers ramble without stumbling Emotions find roots springing forth Voice becomes an intrapersonal communion with eager karma Man listens to the inner songs of cadence Happy voices present Like a Hallmark of creative integrity Perimeters of space and form Moving in and around, like two unfathomable bodies Embryonic narratives listening and confirming" LeeJ -- What an outstanding piece of writing! I especiallly liked this stanza and the ending. .....BEWELL.jo |
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