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EvocativeVerse2
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0 posted 2004-01-29 08:57 AM



Yesterday's Shadows

Ashen shadowy-limbs hasten nimbly
over the once green hoarfrost-brittle yard,
then stagger into glacial furrows in
conspicuous stable yard hogback lanes.
Watch them clamber to their feet so they might
ascend the distant knoll and close their day.
Cleaving to Noachian clapboards on
bleached-walled buildings; they're perpetually
seeking the picturesque leaves which once they
wore in the remembered Shangri-La's of
last summer's penumbra. Retrospection
oft partially eclipses the psyche.
Permanently forfeited those leaves stay,
but in the delicate model of love,
they're engraved ephemerally in the
lustrous timberlands and crystalline snow.
Yesterday's shadows birth a delightful
portrait for my remembering spirit.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

© Copyright 2004 Kevin R. Middleton - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-01-29 09:01 AM


WOW!!  Fantastic write Kevin...
and so early in the morn as well.
This is a keeper to read again after my second cup.
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
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2 posted 2004-01-29 09:05 AM


Thank-you Enchantress. Now if you don't mind I think I am going to gloat over the great compliment for a while! (BIG SMILE!)

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
3 posted 2004-01-29 12:24 PM


two words.........LOVE IT

:-)

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-01-29 01:01 PM


I'm in awe of your vocabulary Kevin

remarkable piece!

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