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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-01-29 07:34 AM

I’m

The leaves that dance the wind in sprawl
The waters of the waterfall
The brew that steeps this tease of tea
The phantom and the fantasy

The drop that makes the circles wrings
The flavor of the touch of things
The splinter of this center page
The winter of this day of age

The hand that waves to you goodbye
The breath that heaves a sorry sigh
The wink that winks this stories tale
The foam that disappears the ale

I’m all these things and many more
The entrance to the misty door
The essence of the tints of life
The pied piper and the fife

I thank you for your patience friend
This tongue in cheek this silly wend.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-01-29 07:38 AM

Not so silly,
Rather beautifully stated
Splendid is your mind and your poetry
Liz

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2004-01-29 07:41 AM

You know Sy ... whenever I want to smile, all I know that I need to do is read your beautiful morning offerings, and my day is off to a wonderful start.

This was absolutely lovely in form and flow. I'd copy my favorite lines, but that would be the whole thing.

Morning to you sweet Sy!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-01-29 08:57 AM

"I’m all these things and many more
The entrance to the misty door
The essence of the tints of life
The pied piper and the fife

I thank you for your patience friend
This tongue in cheek this silly wend."

Wonderful rhyme and flow from you this frosty morn Sy.
When are you going to tell me how you do this every day?

~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
or merely a reflection of mine? ~

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-01-29 08:57 AM

I'm

smiling!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2004-01-29 08:58 AM

LOVED it !!!...h

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

6 posted 2004-01-29 09:02 AM

Hey Seymour...are you sure you are not describing me? LOL! Love it my friend. Great piece you have here. Seems we were both trying to describe ourselves this morning. You'll have to check out my piece Flaming Candles and Ink Stained Spills for my description of me. You made my morning my friend. Talk to you later.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

7 posted 2004-01-29 10:43 AM

Dearest Sy...

I rarely quote lines because I like seeing the whole poem as an entirity...but, this morning you've "forced" me to see one particular line:

"The flavor of the touch of things"

Oh, my...yes! I absolutely love "thinking/seeing/feeling/assigning" unique aspects to things other than what is normal. This is exquisite...as is the whole verse. You are a wonder! Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2004-01-29 11:03 AM

The hand that waves to you goodbye
The breath that heaves a sorry sigh
The wink that winks this stories tale
The foam that disappears the ale

Oh... you ARE... wonderful. *S* I love this, my talented friend! *S*

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2004-01-29 11:07 AM

Nice one Sy... but you have to get pretty tired being all those things..lol. sounds like more than a full time job to me...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2004-01-29 01:33 PM

You are, indeed all these things and many more, mucho muches more!!!!

Hiya Sy...good to read you again!

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2004-01-29 01:37 PM

Sy...This is grand, just like you are!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2004-01-29 01:53 PM

You are...all that and the sweetest poet this side of heaven.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

13 posted 2004-01-29 02:28 PM

And one more thing to add to that list Sy...you are also an inspiration.

believe in what your heart feels...

[This message has been edited by scorpio (01-29-2004 03:34 PM).]

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2004-01-29 02:50 PM

Seymour, you are a wonder, sweet man......
always here with your wonderful verses. You
know that I love your rhymes, even if I don't
always know just the right thing to say
about them.

Heart hugs,

Ethel

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2004-01-29 05:15 PM

Elizabeth,
Thank you sweet and I hope you are all set up in your new place. Love Sy

Kit,
You are a love.

Nancy,
Thank you dear, sorry I missed tea.

Sunshine
I'm smiling too. Hugs.

1slick_lady
Thank you love.

EvocativeVerse2,
Just got home, enjoyed your reply.

jaicie114,
Loved your reply.

suthern,
Love you too.

Cpat,
You got me. LOL

LeeJ,
Missed you glad you're back.

Martie,
So you noticed. LOL

Sharon,
I miss you and all your lovely Email.

scorpio
Now aren't you the sweet one.

Ethel
Love you too.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

16 posted 2004-02-01 05:41 AM

Seymour,
Good morning, poetic friend. I read this when you first posted and thought I had responded. Guess not... BUMP time! Again, much enjoyed.
~Sadelite~

Yes.:

The leaves that dance the wind in sprawl
The waters of the waterfall
The brew that steeps this tease of tea
The phantom and the fantasy

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

17 posted 2004-02-01 07:56 AM

Sadelite
You bump, do you grind too? LOL Sorry about that.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

18 posted 2004-02-01 04:34 PM

(big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Seymour, you are all that and so much more to us through our own interpretations, to me you are a butterfly whose wings, no matter what flower they touch, brings a smile contagiously, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

19 posted 2004-02-01 04:35 PM

This was way fun to read, Seymour!

McLean

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

20 posted 2004-02-01 04:38 PM

What an upbeat poem! I'm all that, too, sometimes!!!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

21 posted 2004-02-01 04:39 PM

Thank you Noah.

McLean
Glad you enjoyed.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

22 posted 2004-02-01 04:40 PM

iliana
Yes you are my friend.

Kie
Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 77
USA

23 posted 2004-02-02 04:14 PM

Your poems are so incredible. Flawless, I never want them to end.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

24 posted 2004-02-02 04:36 PM

Kie
What a beautiful comment.

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