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Margherita
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0 posted 2004-03-20 09:36 AM







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Infinity's dance

is choreographed by Love

and starts in our souls


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© Copyright 2004 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2004-03-20 09:37 AM


Beautifully put!

So much depth with so few words....Not any easy task but you've done it well here.

Eric

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-03-20 09:42 AM


Margherita
Infinity's dance

is choreographed by Love

and starts in our souls

I might have said

Infinity's dance

is choreographed by souls

And starts in our love

Good one enjoyed.

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-03-20 09:50 AM


Thank you Eric and Seymour for your loving comments.

Yes, Seymour, it works that way too!

Love is the key ... always!

Love, Margherita

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2004-03-20 12:06 PM


Amen Margherita!  

Nice picture to compliment the true meaning of your words.  

Really loved this!!

VAS
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5 posted 2004-03-20 12:32 PM


WOW

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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6 posted 2004-03-20 12:35 PM


absolutely beautiful
my library thanks you

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2004-03-20 12:40 PM


yes we do carry such love infinitely and eternally, i do belive , this is lovely in its simple but profound message
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8 posted 2004-03-20 12:50 PM


  What a marvelous picture to illustrate superbly written thoughts!  Thank you for your continued positive presentation and responses.  Your presence is much appreciated , Margherita.
        Thank you,      
           Sadie

passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-03-20 01:36 PM


spectacular!
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10 posted 2004-03-20 02:40 PM


There's not much I appreciate more than brevity done this well.  
Enchantress
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11 posted 2004-03-20 02:45 PM


Absolutely beautiful and oh so true!!
Well done!
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2004-03-20 04:14 PM


Sensational!
TD

Ericc
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13 posted 2004-03-21 02:44 PM


Perfect!

Love,
Eric

NewEnglandlazurlu
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14 posted 2004-03-21 03:20 PM


Margherita, love is definitely the key to peace and infinity's dance.

Loved this ... hugs, Marti

DavePage
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15 posted 2004-03-21 03:44 PM


Yes

Dave

Martie
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16 posted 2004-03-21 04:29 PM


Wonderful!
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17 posted 2004-03-21 05:19 PM


Oh, what a jewel of a senryu this is Margherita!! hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
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18 posted 2004-03-21 06:24 PM


Margherita -- wonderfufl words and wise ones!
Suetang
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19 posted 2004-03-21 06:31 PM


Hello Margherita

Your words speak volumes.

Take care..........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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20 posted 2004-03-21 06:56 PM


i almost missed this and i dont know how!!

so lovely, so true

jwesley
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21 posted 2004-03-21 10:01 PM


well now, that's about as simply and eloquently put as can be...

jwesley

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