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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Leering, Jeering, Fearing, Nearing, Masses facing leering, jeering souls Falling; missing, fearing nearing goals (a Tyburn) |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
interesting.... i've not heard of this. my only suggestion to you... not really about this poem, hope you don't mind.. would be, that you don't get so caught up in format and style that you lose your own voice. structured poetry is wonderful, i'm a big fan of it.. but sometimes, i only use it as a guide... not strictly following "the rules" but that's me. :-) i do like what you've written, i hope you understand that. snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
A dream scape of familiar nightmares,,,,, neat style Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Snow, I always appreciate your comments...for me, I'm just experimenting...if I don't, I probably wouldn't write...you see, I do not have the 'tortured' soul of a poet. My life is perfect, I am at ease with myself. I have no dark clouds on my horizon, I fully count myself blessed. Almost everything that I write, I manufacture from empathy...not experience--in that, I never feel quite comfortable in the presence of 'true'poets. I often feel like a visitor in a foreign country here...enjoying the experience but not quite understanding everything I see and hear. Michelle, exactamundo! |
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