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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-01-28 07:56 PM


I...HATE...me...
For not doing what I should,
Be there with you if I could.
I...HATE...me...
Not calling when I could,
Die to hear your sweet voice I would.
I...HATE...me...
You're my everything,
Let you down I feel a great sting.
I...HATE...me...
For being so dumb,
All my feelings so numb.
I...HATE...me...
I...HATE...ME...

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2004-01-28 11:52 PM


I know this feeling very well. Awesome poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2004-01-29 11:51 AM


Everyone makes mistakes...the trick is to learn from them, to forgive them, and to love them still...if she really cares she will forgive you
Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2004-01-29 12:06 PM


Being hard on ones self seems to be a specialty of the human animal.
True, if she cares for you, you'll get a second,,,or need be third , chance,,,
No body perfect
Strong write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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