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Morning Sun |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Morning Sun The morning sun in frills and rills Ran the valley and climbed the hills As birds began to dot the sky And dew began to leave and dry The wind that journeyed through the night Turned to soft and fragrant light And flowers opened up to sigh And say good morning to the eye The world had turned once more to new With clouds that sweep the sky of blue With air that carries fragrance fair To fill your heart with grace and care There’s nothing like a stretch and yawn To wake the senses to the morn See the glory of the day Place a step upon your way It is a thing beyond my ken Perhaps a few would call it Zen. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
great rhyming! wonderful images  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, and a very special sunny good morning to you, my dear sonneteer! What a lovely way for me to start my day! Thank you! I cannot express how much I truly adore this poem. I would like to save it for reading on my personal rainy days!  You're the best, my friend! Lots of angel hugs & sun kisses, EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful start to any day, Sy. You captured the essence of the sunrise physically and spiritually. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning write dear Sy! Another keeper for my library. ~Morning hugs, tea and me, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Just how early would one have to awake in order to write these? In any case, I'll just wake up early enough to read them... Nice, Sy |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Sy! As always. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful! Yes, I could call this ZEN! And flowers opened up to sigh And say good morning to the eye Your spirits are high this morning, dear Seymour. And that's great too! Love, Margherita  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The world had turned once more to new With clouds that sweep the sky of blue With air that carries fragrance fair To fill your heart with grace and care ~*~ Even though it's thirty-two the air is clear, sky is blue winter winds make one more sweep and snow is expected, but will not keep... Now, my Sy, did you write this one for me?   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
J.Samm Thank you for the read and comment. Earth Angel, Good morning my personal angel and thank you for stopping by. You always make my mornings bright. scorpio Nice of you to say so my friend. Nancy, I'd love tea and thee. wranx Enjoyed your comment. SmartChick You are a dear. Margherita You are sweet, Hugs Sunshine Well than I'll make it clear, it is for you. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
There’s nothing like a stretch and yawn To wake the senses to the morn See the glory of the day Place a step upon your way Perfectly penned and much enjoyed! Hugs to you dear Seymour. Chris |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you dear. Sunshine, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, this is definitely one of the prettiest poems I have ever read. It has perfect rhyme and I love the subject. It's such a happy poem!!! Thank you for sharing this!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, If it makes you happy then I am happy. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It is a thing beyond my ken ============================= I dont think much gets by you my wisepoet prophet Love the imagery and message of this one Sybabes. hows Randy and Isabel today?   I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Isabel is pesky, randy is frisky and sy is in the whisky. I think that about covers it. WWRS |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
no matter what it's called, I'd call it peaceful...just like this enjoyable write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
steavenr Thank you my friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 YEAH! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Oh your poem is happyness!!!!!!!!!!!! (; Juju |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Juju Happiness is hard to find, thank you. |
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