Open Poetry #31 |
Below The Surface |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Below The Surface it pains me now to think of you how high your bones sit settled stacked and me stalactite or stalagmite brine a design made from tears a heart left dripping just an endless empty echo in every room of this chamber I stumbled and it tunneled to an emotional catacomb under grounds of missing |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
heartfelt lines...it shows. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Fresh imagry, Slicky -- very visual. Hope you're feeling better. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Oh Helen, this is so very haunting but well-expressed, sweet friend, let there be an amethyst mine in the back of the cavern where new treasures are bound to come to you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
and me stalactite or stalagmite brine a design made from tears a heart left dripping Helen, brilliant imagery, conjures up all sorts of sights and emotions. hugs to you. xxx |
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