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Polishing Pieces |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Maybe it’s the weather The sun so penetrating With it’s warmth And promise Maybe it’s the friends I have That give so much of themselves When I am in need Maybe it’s the newfound comfort Of my own skin The acceptance of me Whatever it is It has given me the ability To work through the ugly And to receive gifts of heart And I am glad I am filled with honest Happiness That you seem to be the reward Of my evolution "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Susan... especially the ending! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smiling for you* |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The joy you feel emanates from this poem letting those who read it feel your happiness...Wonderful writing... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
cool! ...on several levels.... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, what an uplifting write Susan! Thankyou for this. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and the beat goes on....wonderful encouraging positive right! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Maybe it’s the newfound comfort Of my own skin The acceptance of me ah yes Susan! when we come to accept the skin we are in it is like a revelation! Outstanding write. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I'm doubting that it's the weather... Nicely written |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"The acceptance of me" The epitome of mental well-being and the very kernel of happiness...a good state to be in... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you everyone  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very happy for you!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan -- I'm glad for you, and I enjoyed this example of who you are! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Susan, you have a heart of gold ps-thank you for making my daughter feel so welcome here  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Maybe it’s the newfound comfort Of my own skin The acceptance of me" ~ You are woman and I hear you roar!  I bet you were smiling as you wrote this poem! ~ I certainly was while I was reading it!  Love & Light, Linda |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"Whatever it is It has given me the ability To work through the ugly And to receive gifts of heart" ~ ... and that ugliness must be around you because it certainly isn't in you, Susan. Enjoyed! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
You already know how I feel about this, so all I'm offering is... congratulations!  |
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