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Window Pains |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Window Pains framing me clearly it was there the glass that blocks clean enough to be invisible to sight but thick enough to block whispering but it was there as I closely pressed my breath to it my opening to tomorrow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady, And may it be there a long long time. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Insightful, with a perfect ending! Love, Margherita |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful Helen. Eric |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Still the vision receives the healing warmth of the sun as it passes through the window pain of yesterday... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I needed this |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
very nice writing Helen....i like you poems very much... Golderose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
A jewel Helen, I really enjoyed this one. The tone was lovely, and it did have a perfect ending. ^*Kimberley*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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